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Steve Hawk - Iris (Preview) [PROGRESSIVE]

by Steve » Wed Apr 27, 2016 9:15 pm

Working on a new track, curious to see what you guys think.
https://soundcloud.com/steve_hawk/iris_v1/s-GkbyB

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Re: Steve Hawk - Iris (Preview) [PROGRESSIVE]

by DJShow » Thu Apr 28, 2016 12:06 pm

Great drop, and nice work overall, if you just can make the melody that starts at 0.23 a little little bit louder that would be great !
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Re: Steve Hawk - Iris (Preview) [PROGRESSIVE]

by Steve » Thu Apr 28, 2016 1:56 pm

DJShow wrote:Great drop, and nice work overall, if you just can make the melody that starts at 0.23 a little little bit louder that would be great !


Thank you!

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Re: Steve Hawk - Iris (Preview) [PROGRESSIVE]

by Kayvian » Thu May 05, 2016 4:14 am

Solid drop idea. For the breakdown, definitely add some pads next time to give it a bigger feel. Also, the mixing needs improvement. The one piano melody is too silent on the breakdown. Pretty cool bassline in the drop though!
Hope this helps,
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Re: Steve Hawk - Iris (Preview) [PROGRESSIVE]  - Feedback

by MaxVangeli » Tue May 24, 2016 5:30 pm

Steve wrote:Working on a new track, curious to see what you guys think.
[ https://soundcloud.com/steve_hawk/iris_v1/s-GkbyB ]

YEah ice work brother, not its abotu the content and keep us posted on your shit!

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Re: Steve Hawk - Iris (Preview) [PROGRESSIVE]

by Steve » Wed May 25, 2016 8:54 pm

Thanks for all the feedback guys! Definitely going to be taking it into consideration.

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Re: Steve Hawk - Iris (Preview) [PROGRESSIVE]

by MaxFlod » Thu Jun 23, 2016 2:09 pm

Sounds good to me,
if I have just something to say, it's maybe to try to reduce a little the attack of your lead :)

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Re: Steve Hawk - Iris (Preview) [PROGRESSIVE]

by nova » Tue Dec 13, 2016 3:22 pm

love the melody but try to make it more powerful when the melody kicks in


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