Adrian Kwiatkowski - Kairosclerosis

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adriank1410
 
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Adrian Kwiatkowski - Kairosclerosis

by adriank1410 » Sat Jul 08, 2017 12:20 pm

Hey guys, I need some feedback about my newest song - Kairosclerosis.

Kairosclerosis (n.) - the moment you realize that you’re currently happy — consciously trying to savor the feeling — which prompts your intellect to identify it, pick it apart and put it in context, where it will slowly dissolve until it’s little more than an aftertaste.



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Re: Adrian Kwiatkowski - Kairosclerosis

by TheTribe » Sun Jul 09, 2017 6:49 pm

Hey Adrian,

I totally get the idea of what you mean by the name of your track. Gives a good feeling.

But it seems a bit long to me. Maybe you could raise the tempo slightly to keep things interesting and to underline the feeling. Good starting point would be 1:39/1:40 something around here.

Anyways, the chord progression and the melody are awesome. Love it. Good Job!

Keep it up, mate.
Phil

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Re: Adrian Kwiatkowski - Kairosclerosis

by DJShow » Wed Jul 19, 2017 11:26 pm

Great track, you may consider make the part before 1.39 shorter after the 1.39 part it's insane !
Chadi B.


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